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The Pain Inside

The pain that I feel
Is deep inside me
Lingering about
Wanting, waiting to get out

It acts like a shadow
Clouding my bleeding heart
I don't know how to stop it
It overwhelms me with emotion

That I no longer want to feel
The pain turns to misery
The happiness has been torn away
The shadow overtakes me

The knife is sitting across the room
Blades sharp, the metal sleek
Sadness clouds the room
The sun no longer shines

How do you stop it?
Stop the pain before its too late
Is there even a way?
I hope so. Its the only thing I have left to hold onto.
Hope

As the rain pours on the windowsill
I am left waiting for the sun
As the knife is sitting there across the room
I am waiting.....

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