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Dark Dreams

Distance

Allowing

Relentless

Kvetching

 

Depravity

Ravaging,

Engulfing

A

Modern

Society

Author notes

Ten words is a hard restriction and I, of course, had to make it harder by making this an acrostic. I do hope the meaning comes through clear despite all this! BTW Kvetching is a Yiddish term that means to complain constantly, whine.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 12

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    A very well done Acrostic to, I like the deeper dark meaning this holds. Excellent work, well done. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 3

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    I love the message and actually got caught up in it before realizing that this was an acrostic... thanks for the great read!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    February 1

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    As I read this, I thought "This is so true" then I also realized it was done as an acrostic......prior to reading your AN. Excellent job here.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**