Forgetting all that was
and is to come, we
live, prejudical and presumptuous
in the narrow-minded now.
Fatally flawed finesse
creating clashing convictions
neighbour against neighbour;
wholesale hostility.
Author notes
Contest prompt: "Forgetting all that was and is to come, we..."
Finish off this sentence in 20 words
A contest entry
- 1 hour swiftness by Ken-Maverick.
400 points, ended February 2, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love the first verse, so true so true. Second verse was very good, abut of a tongue twister though
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Congrats on the bronze cup
Wishes -Emmjay
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Your alliteration is simply brilliant.
I loved your words, "fatally flawed" sucks all the hope from existence.
Well done!
Shari
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JUDGED!!!
This is one of those writes that gets the reader reading it a few times, so well done here.
All the best to you, thanks for your entry
Ken
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