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Sufferance

I was not there when a depth destroyed your soul
You feel there is nowhere to hide anymore
I fear deep within me that you are wasting your days
Trying to commit yourself to those who no longer be

Do you want to be among the last of days?
I regret your final goodbye, although
I have forgiven myself and I am free
To embrace that something about you

There must be another way to unchain your mind
I do not suffer the loneliness you placed on me
Here is where I want to be, an eternity void
Of contempt upon the beginnings of hope

Do you want to be lost among yesterdays?
The fortitude of my failures presses on
So I blame myself for wanting you
To take me over... over and over again

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February 2nd 09
2:01am

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    September 22

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    Ugh, beautiful. I can't believe no one has commented on this already! My brain is failing me today, otherwise I would be saying so many things about this. It sounds like you were saying goodbye to someone, but yet not wanting to at the same time. Would I be right?