The rain brings me tears
from a pain deep within,
For I feel the earths evaporation
is tears returned again.
Those in pain about the globe
and those lost in time,
Tears returns to replenish
damaged souls yours and mine.
With each and every raindrop
holds a rainbow most don't see,
A promise in something that once
came from you and me.
We wipe them away
unseeing where they go once more,
Through evaporation
back to heavens shores.
The clouds form about us
from the north east or west,
We hear the thunder
an atmosphere in unrest.
We view the lightening
in all its strength and form,
yet never gave a thought to the tear drop
and from whence it was born.
Author notes
#6 rain
With the pain about the globe please tell me true . What will it take for us to show love me and you . What disaster will befall us to open our eyes and stop the tears of our people and learn to live right
A contest entry
- Can You See What I See? by toomysterious.
575 points, ended February 16, 2009, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Now that is deep. Is that what we do, evaporate back to heavens shore? Taking with us( I hope) more than we came with
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So much imagery that takes the reader deep inside to reflect. Great thought and emotion seeps out oif this as you read it.
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aw wow patty I adored this poem your imagery and depth is so fantastic good luck in the contest
maralisa
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This is so true...!
The rain brings me tears
from a pain deep within,
For I feel the earths evaporation
is tears returned again.
The ending was superb!! Thank you for sharing this with us...!
huggggsss
becca
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ohh my gosh I love this you ended it soo beautifully its so true too this is such an amazing poem I enjoyed reading it thanks for sharing!!
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Beautiful
wow this is really good, it is a different take on rain than i have ever seen, this poem is very touching, i enjoyed it alot.
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Hmmmm, never looked at it like that, but you may be right! I really like this! You did a great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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