Watching as you move the ice over your breast,
slowly melting it against your hot flesh
as I find myself so aroused...wanting you so much.
Your body shivering in such excitement,
while your eyes stay focused on me.
Enjoying the seduction
you bring to me,
the torture you make me feel
knowing I can not touch you yet.
My eyes stay focused on you,
as the ice cube moves down your stomach
and then over the lips of your sex.
Hearing you moan,
making me want you so much
that I feel I can not hold back any longer.
It melts quickly over the heat of your womanhood,
then you take three more
putting them inside of you
and then tell me to take you now.
Feeling myself inside you,
the tightness of your sex
and the chill of the ice
brings about a new level of pleasure
never felt before.
Oh how wonderful it is
when you seduce me with....ice.
A contest entry
- ICE-adults only by JinSays.
1006 points, ended February 16, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really loved the first half of this write. The last part is goos enough, but somehow managed to get a little blatant for my tastes. Still this is a fantasy I'm sure I'm not alone in.
Thank you.
jin
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michael once again a great write....you are god
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Well, I must admit it is sensual, but frankly, not terribly poetic in my opinion, reads more like an excerpt from an adult romance novel.
All the best,
MJ.
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Very sensual and very creative!
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Wow! This is pretty cool and creative!
Well done and thanks a lot for sharing
it here. I hope that you do well with it
in this contest. Good luck!
Jeremy0826
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