Turn out the lights,
lay on your bed,
and close your eyes....
if you're lucky you''ll feel it
if you're lucky you'll feel me
cuz im there from your heart ill emit
my signal....
.....my static love for you
how do i know its there?
'cuz i feel you, look at my picture
take it in your hand and stare
through your heart's mind i'll reach you
just focus baby, but not too much
just focus and you'll know when its right
let your mind wander till you feel my touch
and let me take you to the stars...
Turn out the lights,
lay on your bed,
and close your eyes....
A contest entry
- PreWrite contest for my favorites/AP family/and group!!! by Kathraina.
1055 points, ended February 15, 290 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did it make you feel?
Comments
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wow
Wonderfully written, Very nice flow of words. I love the detail work here. My favorite line is, If your lucky you will feel it. It was a very pleasurable read.
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Judged-ola!
a very tender write


