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Golden Eyes

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Caught in his golden visual near
earth's babbling stream.
Enticing moments haunting
read the wolf's dream.
Whispering willows swaying on
zephyrs crispy wave.
Wilderness smiling entwined
with m' spirit, grave.

Salmon jumping to rhythmic blues
forest dweller sing, croak.
Icy blue sheer clouds split in two
as a tall pine fell, broke.

An eagle winged her way to glory,
grassy carpets sighed.
dozens of ants working hard, fast
unlike dancing dragon flies.
His howl bonded woman, beast.
Breaking bread I shared my
tasty bounty as we
feast.


Author notes

Thoughts of going fishing and coming eye to eye with a golden eye wolf that left and returned to dine with me and not on me.....aquene

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  • Rovingone gold member
    February 2

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    A collection of wonderful images. The eyes of the wolf, the fish leaping from the water, the ants at work on their ant hill dragon flies dancing above the water. All of it paints a beautiful, peaceful picture of the woods and the afternoon. Beautiful


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    February 2
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    good work nice imagery


  • tomisb
    February 2

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    This has the feel of a mystic journey. The climb up the mountain on a vision quest and you give the moment that it is realized. The way you caught so quickly and thoroughly how we are part of all that is and all that is lives in us, beautifully done.
    Love, Tom B.

  • yepitschidd
    February 2
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    Great!

    Very well-written. Almost made me feel like I was outside experiencing it all. Great job!