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Liars and Lovers





More than nothing-- an emptiness
like water through the cracks of cobblestones;
nothing to hold.

Nothing to...
Liars replacing lovers.










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Lovelessly in love...

A contest entry

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 4, 2009

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    geez ... this is awesome! love the imagery. I really like all the pieces you wrote for this contest

    good luck




  • Painted-Rose
    February 1, 2009

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    Wonderful write!

    Best of luck,

  • StarLover
    February 1, 2009

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    Bravo! I love this peice short, sweet, and simple! Exactaly right to the point! Miranda


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 1, 2009

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    hehehe, i like where you took this, i made it up off my head, with my own thought ad feeling, and here you have made it your own. its great
    and love the italized ending. also lovely bg to go along. thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥

  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 1, 2009
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    okay how is this:

    prompt: Lovelessly in love

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