the February frost
helped you leave your footprints,
I begged for reconsideration,
but January wouldn't allow it
blown-over and washed away,
yesterdays transgressions aren't mentioned today
just the most hopeless of the hopefuls remain,
we take reservations for their disappointment
feeding them sacrificial stew built upon the new cross
Author notes
20 entries
50 words
anything but red,
pink, hearts,
lovey dovey, or
any valentine theme
please thanks
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie VIII by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended February 2, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully sad; Congrats on the Bronze hun, very deserving!
Again the first stanza creates the mood, You have a stunning talent for setting the mood and enchanting the reader
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Very interesting
I like this poem. I'm not sure if I can make any suggestions to you, you seem to have it down
Great job.
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great take on the prompt. i look forward for the flowers to bloom in few weeks. thanks for your entry and good luck.
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I love it
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Well done. It leaves you thinking of what you could have accomplished if you had more time left..
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Never fails Shawna. You are a weaver!
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