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Fire Exit



quick escape
made in haste
all this praise
not laid to waste

he lie low
until the getting was good
now he's out & about
in my neighborhood

left, left, left,
gone,  baby gone
don't look back,
don't dare glimpse forward
keep those eyes down
and that heart kept under a defibrillator

he took off
in the cyber sunset
for better pastures of fornever

and she believed in them,
with no explanation needed

nobody move
nobody
get
hurt


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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13

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    Lyrically awesome ~

    This would sound even more amazing recorded to music, and sung with the right voice - I can hear a throaty kinda voice singing this to me
    Fabulous


    Stay safe
    ~Manda