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Ugh...I have a Cold

Scratchy throat with a runny nose,
an awful cold has definitely arose.
Stuck in the house all day long,
just trying to be somewhat strong.
Throbbing headaches, puffy eyes,
you’re fine one-day, but then...surprise!
Blowing your nose just makes it sore,
you just want to be well, like before.
No one wants to be around you,
they are too scared it is the flu.
Having a fever is one of the worst feelings,
along with everything else a cold brings.

Author notes

yeah. *cough* i have a cold. its awful. idk why i wrote this. i got bored because everyone keeps telling me to go away so they wont get sick. lol. *cough*

be nice about this one. i was kinda dizzy when i wrote it.

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 20

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    Ouch, in Fever, your sins are forgiven
    don't get stress in Fevers
    just pray from God, to be okay
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Charles Johnson
    February 6

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    omg I am feeling sick just reading this can you catch it from the computer is it a virus you got girl LOL I loved it you are so talented can't wait to read more of your stuff it has been way to long for me to get my fix of your great writing. hugz ap dad

  • lol
    missa i was always on of the few who didnt care if you were sick lol
    good poem missa


    • Missa
      February 1
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      you know how they say friends share everything? wanna come over and i'll share my cold with you. lol jk


  • Remix Factory
    February 1
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    Fuckin Awesome!



    i would love to give 3 clappys but i dont have any points yet i'm new here

    this i good !


    • Missa
      February 1
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      thanks, but its pretty bad.

      and welcome to AP!

      lol.

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