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The Point

Shut your eyes
and pretend your not on this coaster ride
So afraid
but you know that you cant hide from life

I am not afraid
Life is nothing but a game to me
What's life anyway
but a chunk of time from eternity

You never understood your purpose
That chunk of time is yours and you don't deserve it

You know I'm not the only one
Who really does?
All hearts are corrupt

But you don't give a fuck
with your middle fingers stuck up in the air
What's the point when you don't care?

What's the point when you do
It ends the same when all is through

You just waste your time!
Not living just merely alive!
God has a plan
and you ignore it, idle hands

I'm a waste of space?
God gave me this life, this face
And that is the point you see
To get through the first obstacle he gave to me



Author notes

x simply x me x

still unfinishedd if i have time to add onn
if not then it can be a weak ending lol

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  • MYsecondchance
    February 8
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    wow this is awesome, great work with this, btw what was the prompt??


  • Heroesrox
    February 6

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    I liked it very much! Thanks for sharing it and entering my contest! You did a great job with the prompt!

  • Heroesrox
    February 3
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    Your prompt is "
    So afraid to open your eyes, hypnotized.
    You know you're not the only one
    Never understood this life.
    And you're right, I don't deserve
    But you know I'm not the only one."

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • Heroesrox
    February 1
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    Could you please send me you AP name via a personal message along with your number, 19! I will then send you your prompt! Thanks so much!