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Releasing my Nightmares

They say dreamcatchers
grab your bad dreams,
like the nightmares
or scary thoughts
you have
in your sleep,
and they get tangled in the web
never to come back.

Uh-huh
Sure
Let's go with that
But guess what?
My dreamcatcher died.

All my nightmares,
are flowing out
revisiting me
one after another

A devil or demon
a darkly cloaked figure
pulling them out like string
emptying the web of nightmares
and me of happiness

Author notes

Option uno!!!

Just a contest entry, cool pic Katrina

http://dream-traveler.deviantart.com/art/Dreamcatcher-107388068

A contest entry

Yup

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  • checkmate-
    February 7

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    (( Where did my comment go? I coulda sworn I commented on this... o.0))

    It is creepy, and it is eerie, and it is freaky. It is also awesome

    Great interpretation of the poem, and awesome imagery!

    Goood luck in the contest! It's and AWESOME poem!

    -Paradox


  • liduen silver member
    February 5

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    *shiver* CREEPY! This is a great poem with lots of good imagery and creepiness. YAY creepiness!

    Thanks for entering! Good luck!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 2
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    An eerie look at dreamcatchers, or in this case, lack thereof

  • AJishere
    February 2

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    AWESOME POEM, KT! Freaky, but AWESOME!! It was AMAZING. I enjoyed it.

    From AJ

    PS. I liked your poem.