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It's the Path You Choose

In many a quivering hour lay
The broad expanse of yesterday
What shall come and free her mind?
For time,is fleeting still...

Tomorrow never knows it's fate
It's deeds untried, refuses to wait
What shall come and free her mind?
For time,is fleeting still...

Fast and steady the sands of time
It's possibilities endlessly unwind
What shall come and free her mind?
For time,is fleeting still...

Comparing stains  of circumstance
Against tomorrow's unknown expanse
What shall come and free her mind?
Only the hourglass sands define.
For time, is fleeting still...
And destiny,...her's alone to will.

~~Suseann~~
Copyright © Carrol Denny all rights reserved;

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Author notes

word prompt contest by azlyn 

"My beginning...the rest is you. "

prompt is;

"In many a quivering hour lay
the broad expanse of yesterday
what shall come and free her mind?
for time, is fleeting still..."

 

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  • azlyn gold member
    February 2

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    This is wonderful...I love the repetition of the line...it certainly adds to the impact of your vision for this poem. Very nice to have you write for this. I love it!

  • Bob Fox
    February 1

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    a picture of past times and a future moving rapidly. And she forever stays true to herself. Excellent.