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Beauty

Beauty is not just skin deep
It's emotion visually built
Sought out to love another
The only beautiful people
I see are the kind, gentle

Personality is True Beauty
You want to know a secret?
All those beauty lotions, surgeries
They don't matter; They mean
Absolutely nothing to me...

If you're not nice you're ugly
If you're not thoughtful...
You're a tragic illusion;A waste.
I love people who have
The only Beauty that means
Anything- Inner Beauty;
More than skin deep
Heart and Soul deep.

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  • Yah-rod
    February 2

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    Ya we have to bring our inner beauty to the surface, and this poem succeeds in doing that. It's extant in all of us, but as you say in the first stanza, it requires a conscious effort to bring it out.
    'Sought out to love another" suggests to me that to look for beauty in other people is to bring out the beauty in ourselves

    Second stanza had me thinking. Sometimes we have to hide out true personality to get along in a situation. So beauty is, like emotion (as you said), spontaneous.

    Third stanza is heartfelt and...direct! Straight to the heart.

    I liked how you related your ideas in this piece. Nice flow and word-choice.


    • Beverlynohime
      February 2
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      So true indeed. I'm glad you liked this poem and found the BEAUTY in it.
      Thank you again for the lovely comment.


  • She burns
    February 1
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    Your truth!!!


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    February 1

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    beautiful poeeeeem
    i love the last stanza

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