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i eat flowers

pretty ones
i eat

aromatic ones
i eat

biting the head off of beauty
yum yum

if its prettier than me
then off with its head

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lolz i dont know i really dont know.......

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 8
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    Lol

    loved it! A little jealous of beauty hey? I am sure you have beauty yourself though.


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 1
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    Judged-ola!

    haha wooow this had me laughing from the first word!