Around me people scream,
their voices pleading.
Your hand is in mine
throughout the chaos.
Never leaving my side,
you keep me safe.
You are my angel
in the middle of this hell.
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prompt - 48, Guardian Angel
Image from google.
I had a dream last night, well it was more a nightmare. But halfway through my friend appeared, he's my own personal angel really, and suddenly the nightmare wasn't so bad.
In a list
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This is so absolutely beautiful. I love this! You did such an amazing job with this & I can relate to it. Amazing write!
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this is a very deep and emotional write..
it is a beautiful, and most sensual write..
truely wonderful
Love you and keep writing
Sarah
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A very sincere and heartfelt write--You are very honest with your emotions!
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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the contrast
love the contrast between angel and the figuarative cause for trouble-hell. keep penning
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WoW.... ThIs PoEm Is HoT!! KeEp WrItIn!
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WoW.... ThIs PoEm Is HoT!! Keep WrItIn!
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WoW.... ThIs PoEm Is HoT!! Keep Up writin!
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wow
Great write...
I know what you mean about having your own personal angel, i had a similar experience, but not through dream. if you're interested-http://allpoetry.com/poem/4983429
still working on it though.
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this is quick and silver. gorgeous. love the layout. where did the idea come from
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It came from a dream I had
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Judged-ola!
This is amazing!
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Thank you
xx
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Amen! Your dream fits a sort of reality for me lolz. I have a friend just like that. We've been through thick and thin, and when we've held eachother through it is when we get through without scars. And luckily one time, we came out with our lives for they were almost lost.
I love this piece. It's genius! And is soooo going into one of my lists!!!
♥ Kathraina
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Thank you so much
Im glad you like it and Im glad you have your friend to help you though things. I have mine and I know that I couldn't go on without them sometimes so I understand how you feel.
xx
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