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Hyperbitch

To escape I had to run and tell
And lay it on thick when I did so
She would find out eventually
I was fast and quick
Set the trap and let it fall upon her
I would not be held down
I would not be a prisoner
I am a human being
I am a young woman, and I have a dream
An ambition, a purpose
Never shall I be pinned to the ground
By you or any other
My revenge will be full
And just and right
And you'll wonder why
But don't you understand already
What a bitch you are, and have been
I need to grow and be free
I am an artist, I am a light of life
I am magical, I am a witch
And you.. are a hyperbitch!

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  • Glasyalabolas
    February 13
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    Love the ending in this piece, socks it right to 'em. It is very reminscent of many things in life, of people you meet, in school, in leisure, in the workplace...there are far too many people like this hypberbitch out there and they need a good smacking down every now and then. This piece certainly is a good illustration of that.

    Good write.


  • Glasyalabolas
    February 1
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    Certainly, Title Prompt No.7 is: 'Hyperbitch'

    Many thanks