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Solage #3

Arrive in waves and by definition
‘Fashionably’ seems to be the tradition
Undulate

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  • Lyndon gold member
    February 14
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    Aha Curvaceous.

    Often I have been unduly late as it seems to be the fashion not to arrive on time. If only speedsters on the roads knew this.
    I can imagine you on a red carpet at the oscars arriving in a rich red gown all waves over your curvaceous self and a trifle late because of the fanfare.
    Ron A Winkler.

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    to ponder! Very cleverly written. Like the imagery & metaphor here. All the best...


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    February 4
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    Hmmm... very clever! Do you mind if I borrow this one for just a couple of days?


    • blondeoverblue
      February 5
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      Well of course! Just make sure you take good care of it and that it's tucked up in bed by 9 with a mug of hot chocolate