He was a busy gigolo,
on the move and on the go
...shuttlecock
Author notes
Bit risqué...but, well... 
A contest entry
- #160 Winklings for Allpoetry. by Lyndon.
1750 points, ended February 14, 40 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hehehe great wit! congratulations Lou!
Let the ink flow!
many blessings, Sandi
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Brilliant, very funny, and the last line wasn't obvious at all. Pure Gold in my book, but hey ho, it's all a matter of opinion.
Kat
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YES!!!
*steals the gold from the winner and hands it to you, pausing only to wipe the sh*t out of the judge's eyes*
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Now this judge is pure and
innocent.
However, I delve into my schoolboy days and I think I've got it.
If the cock shuttles does the gigolo shuttle too. I think so.
Seriously, this is the work of an innocent young lady possibly a virgin with deeply submerged sexual fantasies leaping out in Olympic sport. But, of course, shuttlecock has been an Olympic sport even among swimmers before races.
Thank you for this punning touch of the picaresque and best wishes.
Ron A Winkler.
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Oh, man, this was funny...
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Were I the judge this would be the gold!!!
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I liked this one best, cos, they don't get much cockier than that,
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