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Crucifixion

She said, "Will you play the victim if I'll be your martyr?
Let me take your load, baby cos this ground's getting harder.
I'll suffer any way, so why not for you?
My feet are bleeding any way, why not for us?
Pain means so much more when it's in the name of love."

She said,"I'll love you til you leave me,
Just as long as you say you need me.
Be the justification for my self destruction,
You have to be my reason or it'll all be for nothing.
Kiss me while I jam these nails through my hands."

It seems that all you want to do is die for me.
I was never the type to give up so easily,
But I'm exhausted and you're determined
So I'll step back, relax, let you do as you will.
And I'll watch as you carry your cross up that hill.








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Another for Uni. Playing with different styles.

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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    February 10
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    Kickarse. I love it hun!!


  • Mr.
    February 1
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    Wow, really intense. I really liked the ending.