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Solage #2

Dot your i’s and cross your t’s
Take account of the prevailing breeze
Pissing contest

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  • Lyndon gold member
    February 14
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    Actually, at a bush school in 1943

    I was 7 years. We had a contest from inside the outhouse and had to, you know, over the urinal wall to the other side. A Westerly wind would toss it back again and spoil our endeavours.
    Thanks for reviving old memories. [We covered our "i's" and crossed ourselves, I think. ]
    Thank you. Your solage has an aha moment, really.
    Ron. A Winkler.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    February 13

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    What?

    You naughty girl! A bit crass, but it's funny! You've quite the imagination! All the best in the Contest.


  • Tirrell
    February 11
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    I guess your not a Jim Croche fan...


  • IronIcecream
    February 1
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    against the breeze?
    hope you wear your rubber boots