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Solage #1

Rodents, small and blind
Attack all females that they find
Molest

A contest entry

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  • Lyndon gold member
    February 14

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    Now I know why women

    get onto to table tops at the sight of a mouse and gather their skirts tightly!
    Thank you for this monstrous effort.
    Ron. A Winkler.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    February 13

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    Yuck!

    This is funny & so visual! Is this true? Certainly a Solage... Good going. All the best in the Contest!


  • Tirrell
    February 11
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    lol This is funny.


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    February 1

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    LMAO!!! WooHoo!!! Someone's going to commit suicide trying to judge this! There's way too much gold in them hills! Great job