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An Immortal Kiss

His lips,
as they softly caressed my neck
sent chills down my spine.
His words,
soft, velvety, smooth
as he whispered in my ear.
His eyes,
looking through me,
into my soul.
I felt the sharp sting
The flow of my blood
as his fangs pierced my skin.
I moaned,
tilting back my head
ever so lightly.
Listening, as he feasted...
On me.

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  • Lonely Christina
    February 19

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    i cant help but pictures edward wen i read this lol its a nice fantasy to think of


  • Ryan79
    February 11

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    Great poem. I can visualize it happening. It reminds me of something that happened to me once. It's coming back to me now as if it was yesterday. I can feel it, and it feels good.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    February 1

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    Nice job with this. It is very darkly sensual. I loved the ending:

    I moaned,
    tilting back my head
    ever so lightly.
    Listening, as he feasted...
    On me.

    Mike