Shadows form in darkened thoughts,
Feeling hurt by subtle plots.
Dying a little every day,
From the lack of care, none my way.
Little by little this heart cracks,
As she hurts me by sending nothing back.
Golden Days have passed me by,
The life we were to have makes me cry.
For it is only a memory, a dream
Neither life nor death appeal to me.
I am nowhere, no solace, no treasure,
The memories are my only pleasure.
Author notes
This one I wrote a while ago in a hard time that I had.
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Wow creative and so full of heart, you can feel so much though your words very well done
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GREAT!!
You can feel the true emotion behind the words of this poem. Greatly written! I think you did a great job. I could feel your pain! I loved it!!
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Sorrowfully Filled!
I feel your pain within your words; unfortunately, love can hurt. -
Judged-ola!
very sad emotions invoked in this read. great flowing words too. -
I like the idea of when everything is gone you have used the phrase "No Solace" It is quite touching x
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aww
thats sad im sorry
"For it is only a memory, a dream
Neither life nor death appeal to me.
I am nowhere, no solace, no treasure,
The memories are my only pleasure."
such honesty in those words! i loved this! it great just live you.
hehe
thanks for the entry and good luckkkk!
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