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Loves Joy

Sweet blue twinkle from your true blue eyes
Sliver gray curls that danced with joy
Hearty laugh that came from toes
Your love burned a fire in my heart

Holding your big bold hand though good and bad times
Thinking we had more time to delight in love
Sad truth, dark black grim reaper has reaped his harvest

In quiet moments signs of your love
Appears out of no where
Death can not trapped love

Love is eternity not temporary








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  • poetmaster32
    March 18
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    nice imagery. good job.


  • eyesofanangel524
    February 3

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    This is bittersweet but with an important message. Though life must come to an end...love continues as long as ones heart remembers. Best of luck to you....


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    February 1

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    This is a beautiful write of love and rememberance. Very nicely done my talented friend.

    Brother Dennis