An inward calling, began many moons ago,
A wooing of spirit, written amongst the stars,
Held within the Circle of Life,
Where tentative steps were taken,
We started to dance inside of the Sacred Hoop.
The calling of the hearts rhythm,
Found to echo on distant shores,
Was lit by the same moon through times shared,
Bringing a harmony between softened words,
And understanding found within the music of each step.
Constructing ourselves a spiritual lodge,
Gathering to listen to the rhythm of one heartbeat,
Shared between the two, dwelling there.
Bringing to one another needed words,
Tender caresses over distanced miles.
Opportunities to offer strength,
Times to give compassion freely,
To hold tight the emotional struggles bound,
And waltz to a soft flowing realization,
That sincerity does sing through heartfelt chords.
Blanketing ourselves in the deepest of intimacy,
Warmed by a steadfast commitment,
We take shelter in one another’s embrace,
Fulfilment found in physical absence,
Quickening to the innermost reaches.
Each new day born to the warmth of the sun,
Reaches far within each and brings peace,
Enlightening the thoughts, shedding the fears,
Bringing home the fullest of understanding,
That whatever faces us, with courage they will be fought.
Lighting continual kindled nights with wisdom,
Basking in the comfort brought forth through union.
Parting, with unspoken thoughts rendered silently,
An abundance of joy, an abiding of love, known;
Completeness, only to exist in the fullness of time.
Please tell me what you think
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It feels as if you step right into the scene. Beautiful and heartwarming. God bless.
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hawk
This is a superbly written poem! Thank you for sharing it with us, my dear friend. It painted pictures for me, pictures of love & friendship.
~Bright Cheetah
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Brilliant
"Each new day born to the warmth of the sun reaches far within each and brings peace" some beautiful imagery and lovely sentiments expressed in this great
poem Brilliant Work ....George...
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"Lighting continual kindled nights with wisdom," is my favorite line in the poem..which still was a hard choice. First of all let me say I comment by explaining how the poet makes me react. In this case I felt from the first verse, that I was there, a part of the "circle". I finally got a glimpse of what my ancestors shared in celebration. I was carried back in time, as your poem ignited my imagination, to a land I have longed to see and be a part of. Beautifully written can seem so cliche to some. When I say this, I am letting you know that beautiful, vivid scenes came to my mind. Thank you for allowing me to indulge in one of my fantasies. To be part of a sacred circle of long ago.
The imagery that was created by my favorite line was a moonlit starry sky but instead of stars, I saw the orbs of all the ancient ones that have gone before. Thousands of them lighting the dark night with a brillance that was almost blinding. I would give you 5 stars!
Sadijara
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this is phenomial, not that you are unaware of that fact. i love your writting style, and i i like your formal writing structure use in a poem, very well done. thank you for sharing this with us all. you're talented- i can tell! KEEP WRITING
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Superb Plus
A very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite clearly. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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I wish we could still practice this form of spirituality.
This poem is nothing short of spectacular.
Love,
jin
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Within the spaces of time and within our circle of life,completeness is found...a Spiritual Lodge where only truth can dwell and tender hearts caressed into one...you two have written a master piece and shared so much of yourselves...i am in tears
much love to you na son Silent Hawk
nemehotatse na hetane na hesta Silent Cougar
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This is a deeply spiritual write of the communion of two souls entwined first in spirit, then in the tempral paths. Beautifully written words of the heart. Write on my friends, great collaboration!
Gray Elk
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love it
you do some wonderful work. Wonderful flow of words. The nature of this is wonderful. Held in the circle of life.
The detail in this work of art is woderful. Always a pleasue to read your work.
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aw wow this brilliant I loved your poem your depth is divine thank you for sharingmaralisa
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Maralisa,
any depth of thought you find here, is far exceeded by the depth of the one written for, in my regard. Words given over a lifetime would still leave the subject lacking, at the time of my passing.
I am pleased you too enjoyed this offering.
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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outstanding
well written, sweet and loving piece..great job you two!
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Swangrv,
thanks for stopping by. Comments of appreciation are a boon to the spirit of any writer.
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Honesty, passion and understanding, the three components of completeness between two people who know it can only exist "in the fullness of time".
Wonderful poem creating thought from one such as I.
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rbruce,
my friend, from the southern hemisphere, it is good to see your words of commentary. I am most honored you have found this offering to be an enjoyable read, and well worth the time invested.
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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I really liked it, it was very....eye opening on some subjects and at the same time easy going...it was very well done.
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me4pretend
I am thrilled you found things that not only spoke to you but gave you food for thought as well.
Niaish (Cheyenne for thank you)
Silent Hawk
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I love this.
I love the honesty, the passion and the commitment.
Your words are passionate and honest and they bring forth wishes of love and loyalty
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My Ap Sister,
I thank you for your words of commentary. I am honored this offering rests well with you.
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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