She smiles infront of you
But cry behind closed doors
Behind her laughs are tears
She laughs at jokes
Eventhough shes hurting more than ever
Behind her eyes are lies
Dudes look at her body not her eyes
So they never see the way she truly feels
Behind her confidence is a scared teen
Everyone else thinks shes beautiful
But she can’t bare to look at herself in the mirror
Behind her big boobs is a broken heart
She deserves more than the assholes she gets stuck with
If only she knew how wonderful she realy is
Behind her house is a seperated family
She loves all of her family dearly
Too bad their not at home with her
Behind her hair is a head full of dreams
She just wants to be a kid again
Cause back then she was actualy happy
Behind her lips are words she never said
She never complained
She ajusted to change and kept moving on
Behind her strenght was a weakness
She stood strong and proud
Even when her world came crashing down
Behind her courage was fear
Her most fear was to be alone and to not be loved
A fear she thought was happening
Behind her life is a book of secrets
She keeps her mouth shut
Only because shes afraid you’ll look at her differently
Behind her fairytale is a fucked up story
She only tells you what she wants you to know
She leaves out all of the reality
Behind her is myself
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I loved this it's so hard to show people who you truly because you know they will judge. I get judged all time being 16 and havin 2 kids and a husband...but you gotta say fuk every1 else and be proud of who you are. Keep your head held high because if you look down you will trip and fall right back down again.


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tHaNk u SoO MuCh 4Ur ThOuGhTfUl CoMMeNT!!iT mEAnS aLoT!!
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im just depressed you know sense my man is gone im so lonley i miss him so much i wish he never went to jail!!:[ but thats good to here does he treet you right? is he a good guy??
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YeA hEs A gUd GuY!!hE tReAtS mE rItE!!i ThInK hEs A kEEpEr!!
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thanks sissy you alwaays know what to say to make me feel better i love you...and amazing poem....one of my favs i love you what have you been uo to
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LuV u 2!!ShYt I bEeN uP 2nUn MuCh!!I mEt A nEw GuY!!hEs SwEeT n VeRy CuTe!!i QUit DRiNkIn N sMoKiN kUz Of Em!!BuT iM gUd!!WaT bOuT u??
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Omg, how heart breakingly sad!! Very nice powerful emotions too!! Keep writing ya!! Cheers!!


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ThAnKz 4Da ThOuGhTfUl CommEnT!!
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Wow I really loved this. this is so beautiful. Such powerful emotion and intensity. I can relate to this pain very well. You did a wonderful job writing this. I simply love this so much. You are very talented. My favorite part was
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She only tells you what she wants you to know
She leaves out all of the reality
Behind her is myself"
Awesome lines.
Keep writing and much love and blessing to you
- Maria ♥

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tHaNkZ 4uR tHoUgHtFuL CoMMeNt!!It MeAnS aLoT!!
iM gLaD u LuVd It!!
Much LuV 2u 2!!

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nmjc alil depressed, lost my man...because of court..they say if i dont stay 500 feet away from him he gos to jail for 25 years....but its really hard cause i been with him for so long. i been with him for three years.... but its for the better i guess....but how have you been..anything i missed?
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DAmN dAt SuCkZ!!i BeEn Ok I gUeSs!!I gOt IN a CaR aCCeDeNt LaSt NiTe BuT iM oK sOo LyF aInT dAt BaD!!
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love ya
I know how you feel this poem could be made into a rap but good write girl keep it up
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thAnKz!!
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sissy i cant get over the fact that this poem is just amazing........i love it....what have you been up too??
i miss you siss!!
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Aw..ThAnKs!!I bEeN uP 2nUn MuCh!!JuS tRyNa LiV a BeTTeR lYf!!
BUt aNy WhO...hOw HaVe U bEeN (gReAT i HoPe...?)i MiSS mY 1 n OnLy SiSSy!!DaT i LuV o SoO mUcH!!
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Hey my gosh this is great i havent been on in a while and i saw u added a poem omg I absolutely love it


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HaHa..ThAnKz Im GlAd U lUv It!!
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wow this was very powerful!


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ThAnKz!!
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HOW DO I POST MY POEMS UP DER..I JUST MADE THIZ PAGE BUT I WANT TO KNO HOW I PUT MY WORK UP SO PEOPLE KAN SEE IT I REALLY LIKE UR WORK...
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U gO 2uR pAgE n lOoK aT dA vEY tOp WeR iT sAyS dEaR mizzpooh n ClIcK oN aDD n DeN u Add Ur PoEm N pIcK oUt Ur BaCkGrOuNd!!....
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IT WAS REALLY DEEP I LOVED IT...REMINDS ME OF MYSELF..
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ThAnKz Im GlAd U lUvD iT!!
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wow sissy this is just amazing.... i feel every last word you wrote i felt every emotion.....i loved it....<3
love your sissy

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aw..ThAnK u SiSSy!!So..wAtS nEw?
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wow...i loved the way that was written if this is about someone you know i hope they believe in themselves soon and be happy great write! x
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ThAnK U!!dIs WaS aCtUaLy BoUt MySeLf!!Im GlAd U lUvD iT!!
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