Your Game

Every time i think I'm through
It turns out that I lose
and now i don't know what i can do

I want to go
but it doesn't show
I just wish someone would break that bow

Every time I think I'm out
you do something that creates doubt
that leaves me wanting to shout

And now I'm stuck in your game
Even if I don't want to play
It just makes me feel so ashamed

So now I think I'm out

don't know what this is about

but it happens more than I can count

Author notes

again not to good and I plan on adding more but yeah.

A contest entry

Sad, Upset, Hurt, Betrayed? by starving4perfection. 1550 points, ended April 26, 157 entries
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By me, right now

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Valley Girl
February 1

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Welcome to All Poetry
A personal write. I think that some people will be able to relate to this piece. One suggestion, I think that you should capitalize the "I"'s at the start of the poem, it will make it stand out more. Thanks for sharing.
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starving4perfection
February 1

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noo it is good! dont be silly i liked it..i can relate in a way even though i never experienced it before...see it is great! OKAY!
thank you for the entry and good luck