An auburn breeze
Sweeps past the metallic cars flying down
A golden street
Wet with puddles and reflecting the sun’s metallic glimmer.
A shower of rainbow drops splash against
The translucent windshield,
As a breeze rustles them from
Their sleeping branch.
The rhythm they make gives a jazzy undertone
As the humps on the road add to
A sublime beat.
The window wipers and whistling of the wind
Creates a swing melody
And the rising and falling of
The engine gives a bass effect.
Calming it seems as I fly down the golden rays
And over the rainbow.
Author notes
Written February 18th, 2004
A contest entry
- I Like Driving In My Car by leannewales.
300 points, ended March 18, 2004, 13 entries
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lovely imagery here...has a great autumn feel about it...nicely done!...thanks for entering...hugs..leanne xxx
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