It's good for my body
Builds my bones strong
They break when you are naughty
And work all life long
Milk is good to drink
Don't dump it in the sink
Or it will go bad
And be quite sad
Milk can spill
Oh what a thrill
Oh, smell the stink-
Please don't drink!
I know this poem sucks
but Achester4ever made me write it
To maybe bring back my muse
at least it a"muse"d!
Hahaha get it...
Please tell me how you felt when you read it.
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Achester4ever made you write it lol
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Lol
I love the last stanza it is funny especially cuz I know who Achester4ever is...I was a"muse"d!!! -
Ita a gr8 one!
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Well hopefully it helped a bit in trying to get your muse up and running
This was funny -
it's good!
I like the clever idea, but you shouldn't write a poem just because you were made to, you should write one if you really are feeling about writing about a certain topic. -
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actually, it's a good idea to write about a topic someone gives you because it helps to bring back your muse. And I did want to write a poem I just didn't know what to write about.
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yeah MY MILK IDEA WAS GREATTT haha hii
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lol this was funny!
Good write, Keep the pen going
Ohh and have a hug!
Tash. x
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lol I was very amused
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WELL FOR ALL the poems about milk YOURS IS THE BEST
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AWWW THANK U i love it!!!!!!!!!!
good rhyming -
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awww
*hugs you*
I just wrote what came to the top of my head so it's not that great...
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