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"Inner Peace"

Deep inside the forest out of every ones sight.
Stands a waterfall, so beautiful and bright.

The color is not like any you have seen.
The prettiest blue water, and the trees are so green.

It's a magical place so dreamy and pure.
It will bring hope and serenity to you,I assure.

This forest is not so hard to find.
Just look in yourself,deep in your mind.

It's the peace we feel when our minds our free.
It's the happiness we show for the world to see.

The memories we hold dear to our heart
and a child's love from the very start.

It's the most amazing thing when you reach this place.
No sadness in life or pain and disgrace.

You'll be at peace with yourself and all those around.
So enjoy your life and the treasures you've found.



Author notes

here is the picture the poem is based on

http://g8.no/images/20060727012021_mystical-ground.jpg

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  • penman gold member
    February 7
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    February 4

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    This is excellent,so gentle,it flows and meanders like the river in your poem
    good luck in the contest you deserve a trophy