Sing me a lullaby
Rock me gently to sleep
Whisper loving words in my ear
Make promises you can't keep
Sing me a lullaby
As the rain falls outside
Hold me close to you
When in your arms I hide
Sing me a lullaby
Lull me with your voice
Sing of our future together
As if I have a choise
Sing me a lullaby
Cloud any thoughts I have
About you deceiving me
That you could possibly be bad
Sing me a lullaby
Make sure that I'm asleep
Before you head out into the night
Into the arms of another
And make her promises you cant keep
A contest entry
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Comments
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I loved the repeated line in this. It all flowed so nicely. Thanks for your entry and good luck
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oh wow
this was amazing
great job
i loved it
thankyou for entering my contest
goodluck
xXalyXx
his emo teddybear -
"Let the Devil take tomorrow
for tonight I'm loving you" --- Is that a song? It's what i thought of while reading this.
I like the rhyme you have going. It's not forced,and
in parts very subtile.

Joe



