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Sing me a lullaby

Sing me a lullaby
Rock me gently to sleep
Whisper loving words in my ear
Make promises you can't keep

Sing me a lullaby
As the rain falls outside
Hold me close to you
When in your arms I hide

Sing me a lullaby
Lull me with your voice
Sing of our future together
As if I have a choise

Sing me a lullaby
Cloud any thoughts I have
About you deceiving me
That you could possibly be bad

Sing me a lullaby
Make sure that I'm asleep
Before you head out into the night
Into the arms of another
And make her promises you cant keep

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  • abmsem
    April 27
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    I loved the repeated line in this. It all flowed so nicely. Thanks for your entry and good luck

  • oh wow
    this was amazing
    great job
    i loved it
    thankyou for entering my contest
    goodluck
    xXalyXx
    his emo teddybear


  • Cup-a-Joe
    February 6

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    "Let the Devil take tomorrow
    for tonight I'm loving you" --- Is that a song? It's what i thought of while reading this.
    I like the rhyme you have going. It's not forced,and
    in parts very subtile.

    Joe