I have a dream
A fantasy
A way to cope
With reality
You're not really leaving
It's only for awhile
A week or two at most
And you'll be back with a smile
You would never leave me
You know I couldn't go on
You know what you mean to me
And your feelings are just as strong
I Believe that someday
We'll have a family of our own
Life will be perfect
In our happy home
I believe in angels
And it's plain to see
I believe in angels
And God sent you too me
I have a dream
And it's killing me
Because I know
It'll never be
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Comments
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So very sad this is

Beautifully written yet the message just tears at your heart; that's fine writing!
Thank you for sharing and being part of this contest
The best to you! -
"I have a dream
And it's killing me
Because I know
It'll never be"
awe. quite sad. yet beautifully written. I really like this part.
thankd for taking the time to enter,
best of luck.
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Lovely write. Thanks for entering and good luck
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amazing
perfect
great job
i loved it
thankyou for entering my contest
goodluck
xXalyXx
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awww this is very nice
a sad ending but reality none the less in most cases
i wish you the best.... thank you for entering my contest !
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:'( aww sad little piece
"I have a dream
And it's killing me
Because I know
It'll never be"
i am sorry im sure he'll realise soon himself if this is true! i hope he does
thanks for the entry and good luck! -
:'( aww sad little piece
"I have a dream
And it's killing me
Because I know
It'll never be"
i am sorry im sure he'll realise soon himself if this is true! i hope he does
thanks for the entry and good luck!
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