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I have a dream

I have a dream
A fantasy
A way to cope
With reality

You're not really leaving
It's only for awhile
A week or two at most
And you'll be back with a smile

You would never leave me
You know I couldn't go on
You know what you mean to me
And your feelings are just as strong

I Believe that someday
We'll have a family of our own
Life will be perfect
In our happy home

I believe in angels
And it's plain to see
I believe in angels
And God sent you too me

I have a dream
And it's killing me
Because I know
It'll never be

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 13

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    So very sad this is
    Beautifully written yet the message just tears at your heart; that's fine writing!
    Thank you for sharing and being part of this contest
    The best to you!


  • Antebellum
    July 28

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    "I have a dream
    And it's killing me
    Because I know
    It'll never be"


    awe. quite sad. yet beautifully written. I really like this part.
    thankd for taking the time to enter,
    best of luck.

  • abmsem
    April 27
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    Lovely write. Thanks for entering and good luck

  • amazing

    perfect
    great job
    i loved it
    thankyou for entering my contest
    goodluck
    xXalyXx
    his emo teddybear


  • allygirl87
    February 8

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    awww this is very nice a sad ending but reality none the less in most cases i wish you the best.... thank you for entering my contest !

  • :'( aww sad little piece
    "I have a dream
    And it's killing me
    Because I know
    It'll never be"
    i am sorry im sure he'll realise soon himself if this is true! i hope he does
    thanks for the entry and good luck!

  • :'( aww sad little piece
    "I have a dream
    And it's killing me
    Because I know
    It'll never be"
    i am sorry im sure he'll realise soon himself if this is true! i hope he does
    thanks for the entry and good luck!

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