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do you believe in monsters?

if you think you know me, you don't
if you think you want to, then you won't
do you believe in monsters or not
for me 'human' was killed and left to rot
i didn't ask for this curse
i never wanted to be this perverse
every night of a full moon
from this curse i'm no longer immune
the hunger of a turtle with a head a-double
preying on the night is sure to bring its trouble
there isn't another that deserves to be afflicted
so the neck of my second head i constricted
...
things are much better now
i only have half the compulsion to chow
though my victims are much less afraid
of a monster with a second turtle head...
                                              ...that's limp and decayed

Author notes

were-double headed turtle
they say two headed turtles are caused by a mutation in turtle genetics....its very scientific ..but my curse delves into wat is most unintelligible

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  • a good piece of fun poetry that shows too a message behind, ah sometimes in life it happens naturally then genetics we cause to happen.

  • well alright for double headed turtles every where!! I just had to have a talk with my two little red ear sliders...no double headed babies please!!! peace and light, kp


  • Night Terrors
    February 26
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    closeing this contest because of the glitches hope they fix them soon


  • ilovemyemo
    February 9
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    that was pretty awesome!! great job!!!!


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 6
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    Very intriguing piece. I never knew that about turtles. See you learn something new everyday.


  • heart shaped box
    February 5

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    Very nice.
    It was different but well written.
    Nice take on the prompt.
    Creative poem.
    And I like your style very nice.


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 3

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    the picture is so cute and the poem is so creepy....

    for me 'human' was killed and left to rot
    i didn't ask for this curse
    i never wanted to be this perverse
    every night of a full moon


    thats my favorite part....^

    :


  • Daire
    February 3

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    Wow, a two-headed turtle. That's quite scary for something that moves so slowly. But I guess their crawl adds to the creepiness. This is pretty unique.

  • wow this was good stuff! i enjoyed reading this!
    your rhymes were so perfect! wonderful job... good luck in your contest! =D
    "the hunger of a turtle with a head a-double
    preying on the night is sure to bring its trouble"
    that line was really funny to me
    wonderful job! i loved it <3
    hugggglez,
    Adria!!!! ♥


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 1

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    This is creepy and....humorous at the same time lolz
    Great write! Good luck to you!

    ♥ Kathraina

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 31
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    Lol

    Loved the image of that one! Very creative!


    • dawgzilla
      January 31
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      thanx the contest asked for anything about were-monsters
      so i figured i try to stand out by not doin some cliched werewolf thingy ...boring

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