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the martini

He looked at her with a look that was supossed to make
her smile.
He told her that it was over and I know how you feel.
She wanted answers. She felt betrayed and so angry.
She somehow was able to muster the words that I am so happy for you.
But blinded by pain and a few too many martini's
she stormed out and said it's too bad i actually loved you.
goodbye

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  • Blind Sight
    February 1
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    I like the take on the quote. It's a good poem. Thanks for entering.