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Ill love you forever

I will love forever,
even though were not together,
I wish we could you see,
but i guess its not ment to be.

Im just gald to see,
that you are happy without me
this pain ill just have to endeavor
Because ill love you forever

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I dont really think its one of my best

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  • Blind Sight
    February 1, 2009
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    It's a very good poem, and very hard-hitting. Thanks for entering.


  • Angelic Princess21
    January 31, 2009
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    this is a very good poem. I like it alot. Keep up the good work hun