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Summer Boy

Your lips
remind me
of summer
and magic.

I remember
little things
like how you
stuck straw
between your
teeth and
strutted
around like a
hick to make
me laugh.

it was the
best feeling
in the entire
world

honey would
always get stuck
in your straight
wispy hair
and the sun
was entranced
by your wishful
eyes

you are my
summer boy
and you taste
golden
like sunshine
and honey.

Author notes

I love this. It's not based on personal experience, but it's so contented!

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  • Kathraina silver member
    February 16

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    Ooh la la!
    I love summer for sure!
    This is just like the summer dreams I had growing up ^.^
    Marvelous piece! Simple and elegant
    Thanks for entering!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Lady Michaella
    February 14

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    aaw
    this is beautifuL!!! very welll written! excellent work here !!


    thanks for entering! and best of luck in the contest!!

    Your Co-Judge,
    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • edit my world.
    February 1

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    ...this brought back such a great rush of one of few special guys in my life i miss that feeling. the whole first crush type deal, that feels like so much more than a crush... oh the sweet memories.

    ♥
    dani


  • rinzurajan
    February 1

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    it reminds me of my first crush who later turned out to be my guy...!!!

    i always used to think about his hair which were extremely straight as u described...


    thanks for taking me back in time...



  • Kathraina silver member
    January 31
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    Awwwww!!! This reminds me of my childhood....*sigh* oh how I miss those days!!!
    Marvelous job on this piece! Great flow imagery here

    ♥ Kathraina

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 31

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    Love it

    That is a peaceful comfort of emotion, as if it were the most natural thing in the world to write about. I like it.


  • stylization
    January 31

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    aw, this is cute <3
    i like it a lot.
    and it's really sweet and the imagery is fantastic.
    sorry i've been so out of it lately, love.

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