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Amazing Night

Amazing Night
   
    Kiss me on the lips,
pin me to the floor.
    Tell your parents that nothing's wrong,
and quietly shut the door.

    Then you walk towards me,
and embrace me in a hug.
    Then we kiss so sweetly,
as we both spread out on the rug.

    I quietly whisper 'I love you',
and slowly touch your face.
    You then say I'm an angel,
and I'm giving you a heavenly embrace.

    It is now twelve o'clock,
and we're still going strong.
    My clothes are on your dresser,
on the floor,
    is my thong.

    I giggle as you kiss my neck.
You smile and hug me more.
    Tonight was an amazing night,
and I'm sure we'll both be back for more.

Author notes

This is a poem I made in the summer. If you like this, and maybe wanna read more of my poems, look me up and maybe add me on deviantart.com. My name on there is 'Ayame-Uchiha'. <3
Please don't steal any of my poems.
(C) RyokaEnoki(a.k.a.: Ayame-Uchiha)

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  • Sun-shiney
    May 18
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    smile i really like this.

  • Bruce silver member
    February 10

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    A nice write. May want to check the rhythm. I think with some minor editing it could be made smoother and even more effective.