It’s not that hard to make you smile,
It’s not that hard to make you laugh,
Not tough to think of you all the while,
Easy to welcome true love's wrath.
To make you sad, down to your heart,
I hope I’d have to leave you,
For every day I can play the part,
And happiness would always ring true...
It’s easy to make a smile
it’s hard to break your heart
A contest entry
- Wearing my ♥ on your sleeve by WithinYourEyes.
400 points, ended February 19, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this! It's really good, and almost has a bittersweet feel to it. There is one thing I noticed (it's tiny, though). This line: Easy to welcome true loves wrath. needs an apostrophe in the word "love's". Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
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Thanks for pointing that mistake out! I'm the same, so I can't believe I missed it... lol Also, thank you for your kind words, and good luck with judging as there's loads of really strong writes in there!
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nice
its easy to make anyone smile, just hold them down and push up the corners of their mouth.... thats how i work my charm on the ladies
but seriously i love this poem
making each other happy is what love is all about
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haha! Might try that tactic one day!
Thank you very much, I might add that it it's almost effortless to make someone happy, but often we must exert energy to make someone sad...
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It’s easy to make a smile it’s hard to break your heart
this is so true but many do not realize it until it is too late.
thank you for sharing this with me. i wish you the best of luck in this contest we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Yeah, I agree, luckily for me I've never broken a girls heart so I've never had that realization...
Good luck to you too! I'll be analysing the competition!!! Just kidding, though I will have a look at your poem!
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