My gift to you cost not a cent
Not borrowed won nor stole
My gift to you shall represent
My love for you ten fold
My love for you is not on loan
Nor borrowed nor on lease
My love for you shall thus be sown
Forever held in peace
This gift not borrowed won nor stole
That did not cost a cent
Lies safely in eternal love
From me to you my friend
5.5.1973
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell Her I Love Her by bluecollarlove.
7000 points, ended February 4, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good. Thats the way should be given..
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Thanks for reading. This was one of my earliest poems i ever wrote as a kid. I was about 17 then.
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To be able to say these kind words of some-one you have loved as a friend in so sincere.
Nice and enjoyable read
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Excellent
So wisely said...you really have the persuasive power to make your readers think and feel with you. Congrats and best regards!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
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Powerful
I love the intensity of your words.
They were strong and heartfelt.
Like someone laying it all on
the line to the person they love.
Brilliant! Congratulations
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Thank you so much for your comments. They are very much appreciated.
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Very Nice
I think this tells it all.TY -
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Thank you so much.
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This is precious my friend. Your message is wonderful and the flow perfect.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you, Doolie. Glad oyu like this one. Will drop by shortly.
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aww this is so truly sweet and lovely!!!!!! This is truly precious I love it!!!!! You did an incredible job with this piece!!!!
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Thanks, Princess. I thought this was a good contest and I think I just got in. I'll be by shortly.
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