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Sour Patch

There once was a sour patch kid
who lived life like all patches did
he's sour then he's sweet
and he'll be quite the treat
'till the dentist is forced to forbid

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  • Lanasaur
    February 1
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    hehe

    wow' i really enjoyed reading this funy ryhme well done and best of luck