she has noted
wolves cross her path
in February's approach
his icy energy
was almost enough
to abandon for
it was wintry that night
she nearly left
held by the green of his eyes
she has noted
the irony in his horoscope
and the number fourteen
In a list
A contest entry
- In Honour of the Scorned Woman/Man by NurseChilly.
8000 points, ended February 28, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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me likes too,
short, sharp and points matched up... my only niggle is the repeat of 'she has noted' - i can see why you did it, but maybe it could be - he noted or inclined? or something other??
but the perplexions here made me have a wry smile .. yes they did
many thanks for entering
G.x
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me like...
al
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thanks al
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