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In the Daybreak's Blissful Rapture

The kiss of dawn streams through the boughs.
Awakening warmth filters down.
Dark spawned night has taken it's leave.
Soft whispered winds pass through the trees.
In the daybreak's blissful rapture.

Tender blades quenched in moist dew,
Rise up to meet sun's golden hues.
Creatures stir from slumbered yawnings,
New found hope in nature's dawning.
In the daybreak's blissful rapture.

Cool fresh streams glisten with it's light.
As feathered huntress takes to flight.
All sights and sounds abound here,
in forest and towns far and near.
In the daybreak's blissful rapture.

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 6

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    I like the scenario you crafted to bring the universal tone of the nature and this makes it very beautiful one..thanks for sharing..


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 1

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    Hi, lovly poem as usual from you, seems there are not too many nature lovers around at the moment, I thought that music would have inspired a great number of people, hugs Di


  • Scripts
    January 31
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    Very nice description, captures morning beautifully. Thank you for entering my comp. Good luck.