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Pegasus

Wind blows past your nostrils
the smell of the rich soil...
beneath you

People think you a horse-shaped cloud
flying with the chattering birds...
and firy stars

you are a mighty beast of legends
and no one dares to believe in you...
except me

Author notes

Inspired by "Belief", acrylic on canvas by Carrie Smith

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  • Judith Chandler
    January 31, 2009

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    I like that image of the horseshaped cloud. It makes Pegasus seem more mysterious, hidden from people. "Poeple" should be "people".

    Great write.