Like a verbal sweet cool-running waterfall
his spirit granted mercy, no constrictions.
Visiting nightly within dreamt desires
m' maverick is the wild ride.
As I straddle hard strong thighs
o'ver the thickness of this bronco
wounding a sepia rose.
Pink petals welcome his bucking,
grinding; as honey nectar coated
each move in tight circles.
Singing: "Sweet Fan-ta Dillao"
knowing I would begone.
I whispered " I love you babe"
In his eyes pleasure gleamed
like celestial gems
again, again enticing passion
to explode on this wild
western ride.
Author notes
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Why does the servant want to be free?
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VERY STEAMY
This is a very steamy piece of erotic poetry that gives the reader a very crystal reflection of an intimate session.Your word choices and allusions invented did help to throw more light on the meaning.WELL DONE!!!
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abandoned as ever.. and expected from you ..brilliant miss
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Exquisite metaphor, my darling. I could feel the heat and the tempest flying from the page.
Why does the servant want to be free? Perhaps to marry her master, the better to serve him. It's a thought, anyway.
I love you,
Brazos
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Sensually penned with great skill...
Clever metaphor and imagery and wonderful flow!
ty for entering!
Lynda
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Nicely penned...
All the best,
MJ.
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Now, that is what I call a real sizzling lament. Old West never had it like that.
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Whew!!!
Hott dang it! l.o.l. wow smoking sexy and hot piece
mmm... great imagey great write my friend!
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