Oh what a thoughtless shame the world has become
in it's death filled life of wicked lies.
With an endless river of souls undone.
A deceitfully temtping cloud full of spies.
Inhabited by people blinded to wrong
and hidden in a blanket of twisted stink.
So afraid that truth will one day come along
wishing to change the way fuzzy minds think.
I know I, a picture of a demon child . . .
I will not pretend to be a saint of good.
But you fear my dreams are untame and wild,
you think I speak out more than one woman should.
Do not step in my way to find what I seek
or I will cut you down from your mighty throne.
Do not believe that my heart is just so weak
as to fall for what made this earth so alone.
I watch and my eyes open wider still.
I can see how quickly man has transformed.
Stuck in an abyss of sin making us ill
we put on hats of this shroud and perform.
Well I have had enough so release me here
for I want no part of a people so dumb.
Pathetic, I take all your charges quite clear
yet facts of yourself drive your mouths numb.
Vanish satan leave my sight with your taunting might
Be gone, rip me no longer from what is right.
Author notes
This is dedicated for all the jerks out there are only nice to people so they can get what they want. It's dedicated to false friends. It's dedicated to liars who try to cut down on honest people. It's dedicated to people who are selfrighteous jerks and it's dedicated to anyone who finds these words offensive.
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I find these words filled with wisdom and beautifully spoken to my soul. I love it. Bravo!
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This is good. I can tell you're quite frustrated.
I think you should break it up into stanzas just for easier reading though.
You have a lot of description in this one. So I use big words when I'm angry, maybe you seek solace in the adjectives?
The last line is phrased a little oddly. I think you could finish it stronger, because everything before it is a big build up.
Just a thought, "For though you claim to be holy, I dance in the light."
So I guess this is truly the end then... I can't say I'm not glad for it to all be over, but it's certainly an unfulfilling and almost laughable ending for it all. I guess I'll never understand why people do the things they do.
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Yeah I thought about putting it into stanzas but I wasn't sure if it's help or not. Yeah I wasn't happy with the ending but I don't know yet. Im trying to think of a REALLY good ending but I just needed something to put there for now. I'm think it's probably over, because I know I'm not goingto contact her about this stuff anymore.
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Not bad. It's definently stronger and more angry.
Yeah... I never did respond to whatever the last one was. I was thinking about it, but now... what's the point?
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