I told you once,
I will tell you again,
my love for you
runs deeper than
any I have ever known.
it runs true, through
every fiber of my being.
there is no turning back,
you touched me deeper
than any other...
and there is no one that will
be able to reach me like you.
I love you! I am IN love with you...
now, always and forever
In a list
A contest entry
- Be My Valentine. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended February 3, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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the depth of love and the depth of being in love is so amazing.. and the feeling from the later being in love is the message that will teat a heart apart but the feelings that fill it are amazing.. beautiful I love this stunning piece always hun hugs Angel♥
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Deeply heartfelt words spoken from someone who listened well.....or finally got it, one or the other!
Well said.
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~ Janet ~
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wow
this run was deeper than most i have read about this topic....and be sure that this topic is very popular here.....this poemwas so simple and earnest that I almost fell in love with it.pls visit me and check out my poetry -
another beautiful expression. 'there is no turning back, you touched me deeper than any other' - a lovely intimate confession. well done.
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I love your style, I desire to be friends with you, Your worh is similar to mine, and I am looking to hook up with members whose work is simualer to mine. What do you think? Can you suggest a group foe me to join. Your comments are, to me, very important. Have a wonderful weekend,. You have a lot of talent, I enjoy your poems, I really do. See ya,
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If you look on my page, you will see some of the groups i belong too, and we would love to have you in any and all of them! And yes I think being friends would be a wonderful thing!
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Very nice job,I enjoyed this so much. I enjoy free verse, myself. Nice usage of wording, as well as message,,good job..I like your style a good deal,it is an easy read. You have the ability to pull the reader intp\o your message, which is so important in poetre, Good job. Keep it up
Johm
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what a beautiful poem!
how great it feels to fall in love (:
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Nice depth of deep love in this. Great emotion.
Congrats on your trophy on this!
nicely done
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Very nice; can't help but thinking "wish it were me". I guess that's how you know your poetry is moving someone. Thanks for sharing
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now look what you did
my eyes filled with tears reading this, it was a beautiful piece about being in love. I have been married 30 years..it can be done lol!....and I love my hubby as it says on the tin....or in other words, just like you have said here. He treats me like a princess of course, waits on me hand and foot, but I give him lots of treats too....hehehe.
Well done I loved this and good luck.
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so sweet poem is this
love this poem with great inspiring logic..thanks for comments and love your this piece of poem...well done... love your ideas with rich way you express in poems... thanks
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This was so sweet, I loved it, our 10 wedding anniversary just past and its so hard to find a nice card. Had this bean there I would have chosen it.
Wonderful write poet
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Good morning Sun !
Really you're the sunshinegirl. Your love is universal like that passionate star which had created his or her own solar family where you and me and many others got shelter. While going through this poem I felt those words of love are emitting from the rising sun. Perhaps the sun is a girl like you. -
I absoutely loved it
good job keep it up and good luck -
Love it
This poem is really deep makes me feel the emotions you are writing of.
Great Job Kudos
Dakotah
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beautiful
i stopped believing in such love. your poem is so beautifully written and so sincere that i think my frozen heart warmed a little bit.
thanks for the comment.
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A sweet love poem...
Has wonderful passion, and a very sweet poem of love. Thank you for putting this into my contest. Best of luck! -
Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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True love can certainly run this deep. It is life changing and brings you to the point of no return. This poem personifies just that.
Love,
Amera♥
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IS IT NEARLY VALENTINES DAY ALREADY? TIME FLIES BY WHEN ONE IS HAVING FUN (OR IS IT TWO?)!
it runs true, through
every fiber of my being.
GOOD LUCK in this Valentines Day contest, Baby! Any man would be honored and a very lucky man indeed - to be chosen as your Valentine. JIMBOB is a very fortunate man - or did you have someone else in mind - and if so - MUMS the word, Sweetie - as I can keep a secret! HE! HE! Thanks SO MUCH for sharing - as always - N'Yetta.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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i love this - i'm so in love with love
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As always your words ring loud and true, there is no feeling like that of pure,innocent, unconditional love, a beautiful write my friend.
As always a pleasure to read... julie x
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Such permanance and eternal emotions. Love I think is always hard to decipher, it can come in so many ways, forms and strengths. I know that this one was something special for you, out of the ordinary for even love. Each moment it is there is one that will stay in a heart forever.
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Well
I think any man would be delighted to hear such words. But then again maybe not. But oh so very nice poet.
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aww.. its about him again yay! you know i love your poems about him true love oh how beautiful just like this wonderful poem good luck in the contest i hope you win
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Excellent
Wow, this is so touching. love flowing so rich and eloquently. What a valentines. Best of luck in the contest.
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Precious~~
Oh My Word Woman~ that is some intense Loving
Gosh I Love the way You expressed Your Love for I could feel it through my veins~
Wowzers!! Woot!!! Powerful images also energy
to raise the roof
Keep that quill dancing~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oo a very very nice one
Great jobbbb mommy
hope you wins the contest 
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