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Wandering in Fields

Wild
flowers
of the field
dancing about
bowing politely
all dressed in finery
little colorful garlands
painted pictorial scenery
release emotional wandering
psyche begins indistinguishable
gazing attentively at my window
wintery landscape appearances
blocking imaginary thoughts
breezy floral scent excite
remembering summer
mornings beckoning
to stroll amongst
grassy coves
lush green
fields

Author notes

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 16
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    Ooh this was so beautifully descriptive
    in your imagery & thoughts.
    You painted such a brilliant picture
    with your words & I loved the form you
    chose for this piece as well! Congrats on
    the gold, very well deserved.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • FaeRae gold member
    February 22
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    This. Was. A. Great. Piece. That's really all I can say.
    ***Rae***


  • thepoetssoul
    February 17

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    Im glad to see tha the Gold landed on this one
    I knew it would win

    Tony


  • The Poetic Bandits gold member
    February 15

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    Bandit Appreciation!

    Thank you for entering this poem into the reading list this week your participation is appreciated!


    The Poetic Bandits


  • ZachP silver member
    February 15

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    while reading this, Eva Cassidy's rendition of "Fields of Gold" strums into my mind.

    So very beautiful, dear poet. Thank you for sharing.

    Zach


  • iamlost gold member
    February 13

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    Bandits Reading List

    This is a bouquet from a beautiful garden, especially in these long months of winter. A delight for the poetic mind; I very much enjoyed reading this, especially with the masterful use of form.

    Well penned,
    ~lost


  • Room without doors gold member
    February 13

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    Outstanding

    This poem makes me look forward to the summer. This is a difficult form to write and I thought you did brilliantly with some very effective imagery suggesting the summer in the middle of winter. This is a skillfully written poem. Congratulations on the gold.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    February 12

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    Bandit Reading List

    Very nice etheree and on my favorite subject. I like how it makesa little leaf. Congratulations on the gold trophy.


  • Trueheartforlife
    February 10

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    Beautiful

    Simply wonderful! Great imagery (nice diamond as well!)

    Great write and best of luck in your writing future.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 9

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    Bandits Reading List ~

    Absolutely beautiful ~

    I love the form and the shape of this poem, the beauty overflows so nicely and shines for the reader

    Congrats on the Gold
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • yukitosumi
    February 1

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    A beautiful poem filled with lovely imagery--can never get enough. It reminded me of Alice in Wonderland, in the garden.
    Best,
    El


  • thepoetssoul
    January 31
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    Wonderful piece of poetry penned indeed.
    Love the soft imagery you have weaved within.
    Splendid shape, perfect diamondBrilliant Etheree.
    Be blessed in all you do,

    Tony


  • Luciferschild
    January 31

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    very well done. the imagery is amazing and the form is very good. im ussually not a fan of form poetry but after writing one of these and reading yours i think i might give it a try more often. great job


  • CherokeeSiren
    January 31
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    Beautiful write. makes me want spring and summer to get here.

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